This is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities

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This is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities

This is a big number who wish to live in ig cities to study and work. But a little people enjoy living in the countryside. In this essay, I am going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages when we live n city.
Living in city bring us a lot of benefits. There are many companies, factories, hospitals,etc help find lots of jobs. Convenient traffix mae commuting easer. We can buy whatever we want in the stores, shopping centres. We can entertain, relax, watch film in the theatre, cinema. There is everything in city.
However, there are some disadvantage Smog and noisy are the most important problem when living in big city. This can badly effect to healthy of everyone. There isn't acreage for people to live in. We have to live in small house or small flat. It is uncomfortable and inconvenient.
Summary, there are good things and bad things when we live in city. So we need to choice where live to fit with condition and lifestyle of ourselves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63529411765 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72331977341 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9283562123 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.25 106.682146367 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.625 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328101137361 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976795856529 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152864535764 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211650349069 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189515982628 0.056905535591 333% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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