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This is a vast number who wish to live in huge centers to study and work. On the contrary, some people enjoy living in the countryside. In this essay, I am going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.
Living in the city brings us a number of benefits. First, there are numerous companies, factories, hospitals, etc that create lots of new career opportunities. Second, being in the city helps save fuel when the office is close to home, going to work only takes a few minutes so saving time. Third, convenient traffic makes commuting easier. Finally, we can buy whatever we want in the stores, shopping centers. We can entertain, relax, and watch films in the cinema. Besides, education and healthy care downtown are much better than in the countryside. There is everything in the city.
However, there are a number of disadvantages. Smog and noise are a huge problem when living in an enormous city. Dust from factories, companies, vehicles; noise from traffic, engines and machines. The noise is nonstop from early morning till midnight. This can badly affect the health of everyone. In addition,there isn't enough space for people to live in. We ought to live in tiny houses or tiny flats. It is uncomfortable and inconvenient.
Summary, there are good things and bad things when we live in the city. Consequently, we need to choose where we live to fit with the condition and lifestyle of ourselves. If you need to be clean, quiet, you should live in the countryside. If you wish to find a good job, a vast city is a good choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, third, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76433274221 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.357256617 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5217391304 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8695652174 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124495821446 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037189259049 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593360192478 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086088747413 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620851839792 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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