A high salary is of prime importance in choosing a job, as it will help fulfill the needs and live a luxurious life. Still, job satisfaction will lead to the productivity of work and maintain a healthy lifestyle. I'm afraid I have to disagree that a big salary is vital than job satisfaction.
"Money is the root cause of all evil." When employers offer a high pay scale, more responsibilities and targets need to be achieved. As a result, work pressure is developed because of which the employee will have to work late during day hours and nights. Thereby, family relations are disrupted, as they will not be able to spend time together. On the other hand, health is affected, due to increased workload and stress, as they will lack physical exercise and relaxation. Bank balance will increase, but there will be no time to spend the money that is earned.
Job satisfaction plays a crucial role in an individual life; when people are happy with their work, they work efficiently and without force. The atmosphere at the workplace becomes very pleasant and achieves their goal with a high success rate since they are in their interest. The relationship with family and colleagues remains good; as a reason, life becomes more accessible and happier.
Some people think, big salary is essential to living in this competitive world, where things are costly. For example, sending children to a good school requires parents to pay high fees, which can only be possible only when income is high. An increase in bank balance will also improve the status in society as people will respect the position owned by individuals. However, I think self-satisfaction is essential to living in this stressful world. When we are satisfied with the work we do, automatically success, position and money are achieved, and healthy relations are developed at the workplace and family.
In conclusion, money is not everything; it only worsens our lives, but we make everyone around us happy when we are satisfied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97023809524 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8466822396 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3214337757 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104417407425 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377682443723 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524935064095 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646419942048 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793971578009 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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