Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that job with high wage is far more essential than professional fulfillment. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this approach and I think job satisfaction is very important than high salary.
Firstly, I believe that professional fulfillment keeps you motivated due to which a person can easily get success. In other words, people can grow their career when they love their job and enjoy performing their tasks. Doing what you like makes you feel motivated. For example, if a person choose his career on the basis of his interest then he will intend to achieve success in lesser time. Im short, people should work what they like to do because job satisfaction and productivity has a strong relation.
Secondly, money is not everything. People can not buy happiness by this approach. Those who prioritise their job satisfaction on money are the most relaxed ones and it is directly related to their happiness. People who don't get stressed out because of their working loads as they are well aware of their ways of happiness. For instance, majority of the people switch for quit their job due to mental stress because they think that only money is the basic need through which they can buy everything in the world even the internal peace, joy and happiness. That's why, this is more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy rather than focusing on high wages.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that job satisfaction has more importance and advantages than high salary because it keeps them motivated and happy and reduce their mental stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91449814126 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59571143069 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7754652291 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204208216726 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766111341583 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740702883079 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150016134721 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547696649554 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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