It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more important than salary.First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfilmentthat no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience, this person won’t enjoy his life. While pursuing one’s interests will always bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction. For example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choicesnot because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science. That’s why it’s more important to choose the kind of workthat makes you happy than to look only at a high salary.Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore leads to a career growth. In other words, there is a strong relation between job satisfaction and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of workand achieve better results than those, who put salary on the first place. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday job despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. And after enduring years of ups and downshe became one of the most famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century. Thus, advantages of jobs that keep yousatisfied outweigh the drawback of a low salary in a long-term perspective.To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary because it makes people happy and motivated.2)While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to dovocational training because there is lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Doyou agree or disagree?It is true that we live in a society that places a high emphasis on white-collar jobs, which leads to a shortage of competent blue-collar workers. Therefore, I totally agree with the idea that more teenagers need to be urged to take a course in vocational schools.On the macro level, this policy could create the balance between the two types of workers. Obviously,manual workers contribute to the growth of the economy as much as those working in the office do.As a result, if a country fails to have a sufficient number of manual workers, the growth of theeconomy might be negatively affected. For example, when a country does not have enoughelectricians, the whole electricity grid of that country might be at the risk of malfunction. The obviousconsequence of this situation is that the power supply to factories and businesses would be unstableand interrupted, which hinders the proper operation of its economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13106695024 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575555555556 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.881178202 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.8125 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288618870213 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712027477959 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715847445532 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288618870213 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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