Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly same as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Life is very precious for all there is no matter that life of human or any animal. The life is combination of body and Soul. That essay describe the topic should blood sports or banned or not? I completely agree with this statement the blood sports must be banned because the helpless animals are killed through their sports as well as it is a uncivilized activity. I shall explore the various aspects in the following paragraphs.
In the beginning, the first reason for agree with the statement that is the extension of animals. Therefore, so many animals which are killed by the human in different types of Sports like; a bull fighting, dog fighting etc. Apart from that, the animals rate on the earth are decreased day to day. So for these all type of blood sports should banned by the government. Moving forward the mankind have no right to play with the life of animals.
In addition to this, the another reason for banned the blood sport that is change in the behaviour of human. As a result, of blood sports the human also affect generation to generation. As well as, the nature of people are aggressive and short temper. Therefore, the man can be violent for the another people. It is responsibility of government take restrictions again these type of sports.
In conclusion, the numbers of the answer of this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that it is the responsibility of government to make rules for the blood sport and set the penalty against this type of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71482889734 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60317189697 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509505703422 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.577198094 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9411764706 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256992426559 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793782527655 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831506484672 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157807363945 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499556200299 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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