Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, … becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer ad included relevant examples from your own kno
I strongly believe this statement. The advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages.
First of all, we can buy books, air tickers, and groceries, etc, and do not go shopping. We can find cheaper clothes, books and so on from the Internet. We have more choices online.
Secondly, We can't deny that online shopping will make us lack exercise. We will spend more time online. We even spend more time choosing clothes than in the mall. Some people live far away from the mall, which makes them spend more time on the road. However, shopping online saves us time on the road. We just need to buy them and wait for them to arrive. In the process of waiting, we can do other things.
Thirdly, shopping online is very convenient. We only need to search for some keywords, and then we can find what we want. In the mall, If you want to find certain stuff and it will be waste your more time. I remember that when I want to look for kind clothes for my homework, but I can’t find it at the mall, this mall is far from my home. I ask for everyone in the mall, they are all not this kind of cloth until I found it at a little shop on the outside. If we search it on the Internet, we will found it easier. I have only input this name of clothes and found them cheaper.
To sum up, I think the advantage of shopping in the way outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ave more choices online. Secondly, We cant deny that online shopping will make us ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, i think, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25769230769 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31849714127 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503846153846 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7870771082 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.35 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195086007438 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707670336385 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498991258701 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137006012228 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300021225682 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.0946893788 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 50.2224549098 167% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.54 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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