Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, we live in an age that most of us are buying books, air tickets and groceries on the Internet. While some people claim that online shopping has a lot of positive impact on daily life, I believe that shopping online does more harm than good.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that shopping on the Internet takes the advantages of public life. To start with, online shopping has positive influence on environment. Thanks to buying things on the Internet, the number of private cars are reduced in rush hour. As a result, traffic jams is improved effectively. Furthermore, shopping online contributes to open labor market. Because the number of customers, who are shopping on the Internet, are increasing, a great deal of online retailers get drivers to deliver products. As a result, many jobless people have opportunity to work.
On the other hand, shopping online gives the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To statify, it is unavoidable that shopping on the Internet has a lot of risks. Because customers need to share their personal information, hackers may have a chance to blackmail them. What is more, since shopping online is becoming more and more popular, traditional retailers may be suffered from operating expanse. As a result, they will go bankrupt.
In conclusion, although online shopping is becoming more and more popular, I personally argue that the disadvantages of shopping online outweigh the advantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, to start with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17521367521 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88108045516 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7445234015 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33321437439 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997127850707 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937673753144 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225603421172 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664166665795 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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