Modern society is becoming more concerned about the increase in juvenile crime.
What do you think is the cause of the increase in juvenile crime?
What solutions can you suggest ?
These days, modern society is facing with the increase in committing juvenile offender. In this essay, there are two principle causes the growth of adolescent crime and some solutions will be given to deal with this problem.
Foremost, it is clear that having broken family is one of the most important factors that committing a juvenile crime. According to some researches, the number of couples who want to break their relationship is increasing. As a result, there are a number of children who come from broken homes must take care of themselves when they were young. A sad consequence is that most of them choose to become a criminal for a living.
Another crucial element is that daily activities can lead to juvenile delinquency. Nowadays, children have a chance to play games and watch cartoons on TV. It is dangerous for them to watch or play some games which have violent factors. Because young people do not have cognition, they tend to imitate from the scent on films.
There are a lot of solutions which can address this problem. In the first place, it is undeniable that families play a vital role in protecting children from bad effects. Besides developing finances, parents should spend time on playing and educating their children. Furthermore, the government has responsibility in preventing the rising of criminal delinquent. The authority needs to ban illegal videos or games which have brutal scents. As a consequence, elements which have some negative impact on children are decreased.
In conclusion, this essay points out two primary concerns which lead to the growth of teenage crime and gives some solutions which may tackle with this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, may, so, in conclusion, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06884057971 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71249558988 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5440075069 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2941176471 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136732212281 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421995963272 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575033661051 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082323349664 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599224810266 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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