Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.
A great deal of debate has been raised in recent decades over the issue of devoting to society. While some people believe that paying taxes is one of the most significant methods to contribute to the society, I personally claim that people should take more responsibilities for being a member of society than only paying taxes.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that paying taxes play an vital role in developing the society. It is true that taxes are fundamental and essential to the well-being of a country. Thanks to paying taxes, the government can fulfill the budget and spend a huge of money in organizing and providing public services such as the national defence , infrastructure and health. That is to say that paying taxes should be among the top priorities of a government’s agenda.
On the other hand, I think that it would be better if being members of society than only paying taxes. First of all, human is the unlimited sources of the country. It is clear that the national budget is restricted. Since there are simply too many issues that need to be dealt with and paid for, it is imaginable that the budget may be run out. However, this is especially true that in some developing countries, there has huge population. Because of that, public services should be encouraged and monitored by people.
Second, a lot of people develop public organisations to reduce the financial burden with the government. As a matter of fact, there are a number of private sectors in the developing countries. Compared to the public sectors, profit-making companies have more sources of capital and large tolerance for risks. As a result, the nation do not need to increase the tax rates to ensure the quality of public services.
In conclusion, although paying taxes has an indispensible role to play in developing society, I personally claim that people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...it is undeniable that paying taxes play an vital role in developing the society. I...
^^
Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ic services such as the national defence , infrastructure and health. That is to s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91743119266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85878084156 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498470948012 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2773602153 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370973611137 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101516597092 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142937106715 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229191895095 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134702935904 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.