Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undoubtedly true that due to the growth of the international network, online shopping have become increasingly prevalent among the population. Nevertheless, the question that whether the benefit of purchasing things on the internet may surpass its drawback is also arise. From my perspective, the advantageous effect of shopping this way is probably much more considerable when compared to its disadvantages.
To initiate, it does not seem unreasonable that buying commodities via the internet may have certain drawbacks. One fundamental downside is the risk of being deceived. Since consumers cannot observe and inspect things they spend money on, they may become the vulnerable target of dishonest retailers or malicious companies and end up receiving undesirable productions. By the way of exemplifying, there is a variety of editing appliances that can beautify the commodities before selling them on e-commercial websites in order to boost the sales. Furthermore, the online salesperson sometimes use the image of another, ofter much better, product instead of the authentic goods so that they can profit the foolishness of customers
Nevertheless, on the bright side, the advantages of shopping online are definitely outweighed its advantages. The first and foremost beneficial impact of purchasing things from the internet is it offers us a very straightforward and convenient means of gaining necessary products. It is particularly significant that shopping in electronic commerce websites save us an enormous amount of time commuting or queuing for payment. Instead, everything is simply tapping a few buttons on the screen. Another benefit of buying things online which is worth considering is that the commodities in e-commerce websites are much more diverse than the conventional supermarket, thereby providing purchasers with more options for the items
In conclusion, while still hidden the risk of getting into fraud, the benefits of e-commerce are much more considerable since they offer customer more commodity choices as well as save them a lot of time travelling and waiting inline
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: arisen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59190031153 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17961573638 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.029590924 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.583333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218274108887 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638259274141 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554158998526 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128464332161 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055289255229 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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