Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Whether extreme sports should be banned has been a matter of controversy for quite a long time. While several people support the idea of prohibiting dangerous sports, many others, including me, believe that we should have the freedom to take part in any sports or activities.
On the one hand, there is a variety of reasons for banning extreme sports. The fundamental explanation may due to the fact that players could put their life at a higher risk of serious injury or even death. This reason is somewhat reasonable since a minor technical error in these sports can cost the players their lives. By the way of illustration, the mortality rates in the annual bull racing competitions are significantly high as many amateurs participating in this contest without thoughtful preparation. In the second place, there is plenty of alternative for this sort of sport. It is apparent that the main purpose of sport is to raise one's well-being both physically and psychologically. Therefore, there is a wide range of enjoyable and less risky leisure pastimes the people can choose from as a means of substituting dangerous sports. These displaced sports, although maybe less interesting than the extreme ones, still can help keep the players in shape
However, it seems to me that extreme sports should not be banned. First and foremost, every sport has its own attraction and no sports game can fully replace another. Parachuting, which the playground is is suspended in the sky, probably a suitable case in point. It can be said that prohibiting some particular types is synonymous with preventing the player from enjoying their favourite sport. Another reason against a complete ban on these sports is that it provides participants with numerous skills and abilities that can not be achieved from easy recreational activities. This is shown by taking part in an extreme sports game push people over their limits and raise the self-reliant and determination deep inside them, which can be vital when coping with challenges or obstacles in real life
To sum up, despite the risk of injury or even death and the availability of other less dangerous sport, extreme sports should not be banned as it is developed several skills and abilities deep inside a person as well as have their own attraction
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, sort of, as well as, by the way, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03937007874 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80652425962 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556430446194 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0419260334 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236216437314 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788055700704 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680317879592 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17880505157 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755354688596 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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