Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Within the widespread of the Internet, shopping online for things like books, air tickets and groceries has gained in popularity. In my standpoint, while I consider that online shopping brings some drawbacks, I still strongly believe these disadvantages are outweighed by its advantages.
There is no denying that a part of the population prefers shopping online because of its convenience and comforts. Online shopping platforms enable people who live far from the shops or who are too busy to go shopping on their own with home shipping products. Moreover, were people go shopping online, there would be no need for them to wait in line at the supermarket or store. Moreover, many online shopping sites provide their users a wider range of choices and inexpensive products. As online shopping platforms often slash prices, it is not hard for people to get a bargain with low prices.
Apart from its pros, to go shopping online comes along with various cons. As most of the information of products are not 100 percent confirmed and the deals take place online, the quality and credibility of the products is not certain. Recently, many scams on online shopping sites are reported everyday. Furthermore, buyers often meet difficulties with warranties when they buy things online since the long distance between the customers and the shop.
In conclusion, online shopping sites bring a number of benefits for its users as it provides distant shopping, lower price and variety in choices. These advantages have outweighed the drawbacks such as unverified quality, scams and difficulties in warranties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it in line at the supermarket or store. Moreover, many online shopping sites provide the...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s on online shopping sites are reported everyday. Furthermore, buyers often meet difficu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22093023256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76866029678 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2811330255 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1456520491 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581188256142 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450848462214 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100960002193 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039010435345 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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