car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam.
how true do you think this statement is?
what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Over a past few decades the number of cars has increased in the streets all around the world that makes cities a huge traffic jam. According to statistics the number of vehicles can be improved daily since decades ago due to the fact that car companies produce more cars than before and these days everyone would like to have a car, so, traffic jam occurs. Governments can use many actions to encourage ones not to use their car by improving public transport and make traffic plan.
Nowadays car companies try to produce more comfortable and beautiful vehicles than the past and they provoke everyone’s enthusiasm to own on them, as result, more people are interested in having one these convenient cars such as AUODI, BMW AND Renault. Although, we cannot deny the fact that most of these companies sell their products to third world countries, the number of cars in these countries has become twofold than two decades ago. Additionally, by improving this industry and the percentage of youngsters in the world, the need of cars has progressed in comparison with many years ago, therefore, based on their work or qualifications they prefer to have a car. For instance, in many Iranian families some of the family members are students, others work in different companies and they want a car in order to do their work, consequently, after some years the countries change to a giant traffic jam.
On the other hand, it can be on the governments’ hands to make some disciplines or measures to provoke people not to use their cars. The first and one of the most important factors would be improving public transport as it is essential in each metropolitan city such as London underground which is the oldest one, Shanghai Metro which has the longest metro system and New York subway has the most stations in the world. In addition, governments can make traffic plan to prevent people to go to areas that are overcrowded like Downtowns, so, it maybe help to reduce the number of cars in many city centers and of course traffic jam. A tangible example is Tehran that in recent years become a huge parking lot for many car owners driving everywhere.
In conclusion, it can be deduced from previously state issued that the parentage of the car owners is increasing daily, as a result, we are facing a huge traffic jam around the world. Unquestionably, governments may help this traffic by enhancing public transport and make measures and rules to prevent people using their own cars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, third, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84507042254 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72492647095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481220657277 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6920872819 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.769230769 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7692307692 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377551593366 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15066630731 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05837565313 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253674189662 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403764850503 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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