Around the world, it is the fact that traffic jam is one of the vital issues in many cities, which is gotten worse by increasing number of private cars, which also produce sound and air pollution. If we look past thirty years, this current problem was less effective. This essay will provide the information of some major cause of problems and gives solutions for tackling with current problem along with examples are intended to be discussed.
The main causes of this reason is the impact of high social lifestyle, high competition of car brands on the market sector create reasonable price for individual people. Next is due to advertisement of new model cars attracted audience to buy.
First of all, the solution for this current problem, government have to take responsibility to increase the public transportation system as well as encourage people to use instead of using private cars. For example, in many developed cities, government had established a system of the public transportation, which is known as ‘Driver’, has propelled people to use less private car. Secondly, the people who work together at common places, could share car to reach their destination.Through this it will not only help to reduce sound and air polluting, but also makes sure people not to waste money on a car fossils and depreciation. Finally, government have to support automobile company because to produce vehicle which is environmentally-friendly. Similarly, they produce card that is charged by electricity and solar power instead of fossil fuel. For example, the survey of New York showed that, travel by electricity and solar power vehicle decreased traffic jam, which also impact directly to reduce sound and air pollution almost 75 percent.
In conclusion, Strikingly number of car ownership is big disadvantage issue on the people surround environment but there is also the majority of solution that can be solved by government and local people of each part of the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21495327103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13436202574 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8942402624 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197946859989 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676570649629 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396584497031 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109605675363 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359970975384 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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