Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society Because of this all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Currently, because many studies show that the number of young parents is on the rise, some experts emphasized that taking parent classes is necessary for both father and mother. In my opinion, I personally agree with this viewpoint as I think that such sessions will be greatly helpful.

There are some compelling reasons to believe that parenting classes are useful and every parent should take part in such classes. To start with, some people maintain that every child has their own personality and parenting classes are impossible to teach parents about how to raise their children in a specific way. However, classes are a place to provide basic knowledge, not the place for counseling. Knowledge from these classes will be basic guidelines for parents and they can use such knowledge in a flexible way to meet their children's development.

Secondly, although there is a natural bond between parents and children, not all parents have enough experience and subtlety to understand how their children feel, lead to the care that does not suit their child's needs. According to a study of the US, understanding between parents and children has a major impact on how well-adjusted children become later in life. Parenting classes geared specific ages can really help parents understand their children's mentality and make the parenting style that best suits them.

In conclusion, parent classes bring many benefits to parenting. Since these classes help people in a diverse way, I think it is a good idea for parents to participate in such classes.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1581027668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63251789122 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9910619194 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20822521381 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862392775115 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382414460229 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134917391575 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557297792245 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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