Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, it is advocated that children should read books instead of spending time on television or computer games. From my viewpoint, while I agree that TV programs and computer games have some good aspects, I still harbor the belief that reading books is one of the most effective ways for the growth of children.
On the one hand, TV programs and computer games play a certain role in supporting the development of children. Firstly, when watching an educational program for example, children are exposed to basic knowledge about the human, the environment or learn to have proper behavior in life. Meanwhile, some intellectual games may help children improve problem-solving skill because children have to think carefully to overcome the challenges or situations that the games provide.
On the other hand, it is understandable that why many people believe that reading stories is a good hobby for children. Firstly, stories in books help children enhance imagination and creation. For instance, when reading fairy tale stories in books, children can image the scenes or characters from text and use their creativeness to comprehend stories in their own way. Moreover, reading books requires children to focus on the content of stories so it is an effective way to sharpen their concentration skill, which necessary for the educational background of children in the future.
In conclusion, although some people think that TV programs and computer games are effective, personally I strongly believe that reading books has more benefits for children. However, a reasonable combination of reading and other habits will help children develop many skills comprehensively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39163498099 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9234969753 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.996444212 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403990821891 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166467579466 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760548450306 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257079590749 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342034475998 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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