Causes and effects of the popularity of fast food restaurants (pt 2)
The modern diet has been rapidly changing. Fast food restaurants have become more and more important in people’s lives. Due to the modern lifestyle and competition between fastfood restaurants, our health and lifestyle has been strong influenced by the increase of junk food consumption.
Fastfood is becoming more and more popular because it is convenient. People are getting busier than before, and as the result, they have less time to prepare meals. To solve the problem of eating daily meals, people come to the junk food restaurants. the rivalry among fastfood brands increases the energy that they put it to advertsising, customer targeting and product development. The pursuit profit is a powerful motivation for stategy development. The stategy of lowing the price and raising the quality of service influences people to eat more fastfood and less traditional meals.
However, the increase of fastfood comsumption has already caused many serious diseases. Obesity, high blood pressure and diabetes, caused by eating too much salt and saturated fat, are some of results of fastfood comsumption. The expansion has also been attering people’s habits. Instead of building a healthy eating habit, people choose an easy way to satistfy hunger with fastfood. Eating junk food, drinking cokes while watching TV is an example of sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise, causing many health problems.
All things considered, the development of junkfood chain stores caused from modern routines and the drastic competition among fastfood brands obviously change people’s health and lifestyle. The solution is to eat healthy food, do more exercise and boycott fast food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ople come to the junk food restaurants. the rivalry among fastfood brands increases...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the results') or simply say ''some results''.
Suggestion: some of the results; some results
...ng too much salt and saturated fat, are some of results of fastfood comsumption. The expansion ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47876447876 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7426556067 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6985871991 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159754957745 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525563240241 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641313877685 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107136005015 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445646485534 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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