Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a common belief that universities are the shortest way to success and stable lives, as they have numerously enabled people to have compelling credentials and experience for their dream jobs. Yet some other people claim that the fundamental purpose of a university is to entirely focus on its own, regardless of students' needs. Therefore, the core function of a university will be detailed for some reasons below.
First, the first universities were ideal environments for students to intensively study main departments related to some issues of comtemporary society. Nowadays, inheriting their old core values, modern universities and colleges have become the main institutions to equip employees with the necessary skills and knowledge. They themselves are considered the most convenient way to get a job for some people. Otherwise, there would be such a real challenge to be properly self-equipped for a career.
Second, many current universities and colleges have been established and used as job centers since their main function is just to follow the trend and ignore the traditional values that a university should have. Yet an educational institution's outstanding uniqueness is derived from its unchangeable identity over time. For example, the reason why numerous students around the world are always willing to enroll in Cambridge University, despite its strict requirements, is not its various trendy departments, but its historic reputation. Since it was founded for the English royals in 1209, this university has become one of the most attractive institutions for students looking to have an outstanding resume.
In summary, I believe that the main function of a university is to instruct and teach students who find its educational approach suitable for their own needs. Therefore, students will be well-equipped for their own future careers as well as their schools' sake, which is highly respected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'institution'?
Suggestion: institution
...versity should have. Yet an educational institutions outstanding uniqueness is derived from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44147157191 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05846214118 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8216716391 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254155246198 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970557761981 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499570218506 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164416327149 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429480250664 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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