The chart and table provide data about cars registered in one country over a period of time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The chart and table provide data about cars registered in one country over a period of time.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two charts show some information about the change in gas prices, the number of new car registrations, and car types during the 12-year period from 2003. Overall, the petrol price witnessed its considerable fluctuation, which happened at the same time as car registrations. In addition, petrol-based cars dimished, while diesel-based and hybrid-based ones generally climbed up.
At the beginning of the period, the gas price was recorded at just 0.8 pounds per litre. The price kept rising before reaching its peak at roughly 1.4 pounds per litre in 2011 and falling to about just 1.1 pounds per litre at the end of the period. In contrast with the petrol price, the number of new registered cars gradually declined during the period, since approximately 9.1% of new cars were registered in 2003 before reaching its lowest rate at almost 6.2% and rising to about 8% at the end of the period.
The rate of small cars registered during the period seemed to increase from roughly 5.2% to 6.2%. People appeared to switch from petrol-engined cars to diesel-engined and hybrid-engined ones, since the proportion of petrol-engined cars reduced from almost 83% to over three-fifths. Diesel-powered cars increased in popularity from nearly 16.8% to less than two-fifths, followed by the slight rise of hybrid-based cars.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... per litre at the end of the period. In contrast with the petrol price, the number of ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04985863314 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3797289134 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159655516808 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742657136505 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045735179047 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111249793352 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290890703623 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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