Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has always been a fierce debate between people who advocate a stable career settled in very early years and the ones who are interested in job-hopping. From my perspective, the idea of altering an early career partially resonates with me for some reasons detailed below.
On one hand, it is believed that people would properly benefit from a long-term career. The first supportive reason is that people can build up work experience and social relationship at their work place, by starting to become professionals in one field early. The longer people work there, the more experience and better relationship they will get. Furthermore, money has always been a problem for most of people, so settling a career earlier could help them financially organize their own life in order to spend time on other personal plans. For example, according to the Family and Finance, more than 26% of people said they were satisfied with the choice made in young age, which allowed them to be able to settle down or follow their dream after earning a lot from their stable jobs.
On the other hand, it is said that life would become dull and lacklustre without a proper goal if people just decided to settle into a job too early. Firstly, a person with a stable career might feel complacent about their life, and seizing a chance to get out of their comfort zone seems to be appealing to them. This idea probably prevents this person from self-discovering and experiencing new things in new fields alongside their current job. Secondly, I believe that people can discover a new and true match for themselves if they have a chance to change their current job. For instance, the national comedian, Hoai Linh, used to earn a living with many different jobs, such as part-time dancer and singer, before hooking on stage play, in which his career really flourished until now.
In summary, I halfly agree with the idea of starting a career early, while the other side is also persuasive. However, the point is, no matter what decision people make about their job, I hope they will be happy with it and live their life to the fullest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...re, money has always been a problem for most of people, so settling a career earlier could hel...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
..., Hoai Linh, used to earn a living with many different jobs, such as part-time dancer and sing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78142076503 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48920749657 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3448441017 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213212676548 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790896976135 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537772591317 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143034575757 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384828659719 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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