Causes of Overpopulation in Big Cities
Big cities are facing with population increase today. In this day and age, people choose to live in a metropolis such as İstanbul, New York, Tokyo and so on. Nevertheless, these cities are going to be overcrowded. There are some significant reasons why big cities' population growth is increasing.
The first and the most important cause is employment opportunities. It is easy to find a job in the big city. There are lots of companies, stores, industries and stuff like that. For instance, looking a job as a secretary in a company is not difficult. People check such like these job on the internet. As a result, individuals would rather big cities for job openings.
The second cause is technological opportunities. Big cities are still growing with things that make life easier. Nevertheless, people interested in a comfortable life. For example, big cities are providing online education and better transportation. Nowadays, students tend to study with online education which certain universities provide it. Also, transportation opportunities are important in big cities to supplying traffic flow.
In conclusion, there are plenty of advantages living in the big cities. A metropolis has employment and technological opportunities, all of which make life easier and attract people attention. After all, who wouldn't want to live a metropolis?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...re are some significant reasons why big cities population growth is increasing. The...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ttract people attention. After all, who wouldnt want to live a metropolis?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, still, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37089201878 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25008117098 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586854460094 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3588308716 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2105263158 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2105263158 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322786829192 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992479465742 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913893312978 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184497781728 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884202040691 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.68 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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