What are the Results of Being Unemployed for a Long Time?
In this world, the number of people has been increasing in recent decades. With the increase in population, unemployment rates also enlarged. In order to continue their life, people have to work. However, when they encounter unemployment problems for a long time, it affects their life in terms of psychological disorders and relationship problems.
Firstly, without income in a nuclear family makes relationship problems. In this and age, money is everything. A typical family wants to afford their needs to live. For example, foods and beverages, children needs, home requisites and stuff like that. The unemployed can not go on for a long time without earning money. As a result, a nuclear family should afford their needs. If it is not provided, it will even effect divorce.
Secondly, being unemployed for a long time can cause psychological problems. Individuals work for earning money. However, when they are unemployed, they just lose money and it creates psychological problems. For instance, it makes them depression, isolation and pessimism. As a consequence, the unemployed should back to work as soon as they can.
To sum up, being unemployed for a long time can cause serious problems. It affects your family and your mind. If it keeps continuing, it may create big expenses. For this reason, people should be aware of the problems and avoid being unemployed for long-term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ds. If it is not provided, it will even effect divorce. Secondly, being unemployed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20888888889 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91017796749 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542222222222 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7388325299 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.6 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.25 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389701866411 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11248978871 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149557220621 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250895901438 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977778961448 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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