Certain personal qualities cannot be achieved through university studies. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
No doubt, having a certain personal qualities play a significant role in the human’s life in this contemporary world.However, it has become an issue of debate that deriving these qualities are not feasible with the help of university education but I fully disagree with the above statement. Further, the several view points are to be analyzed in upcoming paragraphs.
Points
To begin with, commencing university education directly links to this achievement of several personal qualities such as understanding, intelligence,determination,self awareness , sincerity ,curiosity and so on as having commenced study in the university , the teaching methods of qualified lecturers make the students enable to understand deeply. Besides this, as we know that the entire world has become multicultural and the migration from one country to another country has also increased significantly.Therefore, the environment of study in the university has involved with the multiculturalism. Thus , these two major factors enhance the ability of understanding amongst them.
To commence with, it creates an eagerness in the students to learn more in their life and they try to find more and more knowledge to brush up the skills. Along with this curiosity , the intelligence that is considered most of the precious personal quality comes in the students due to their dedications.
In conclusion, given the significance of university study, it can never be termed negative in order to attain personal qualities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63436123348 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77576119768 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8083641789 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.875 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244716234258 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950979911628 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700206306487 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145670074834 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486010099147 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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