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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

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Three pie charts depict how much in percentages different types of nutrients contributed to the popular American meals. 

Added sodium, saturated fats, and sugars may be harmful to human health if they are consumed too much. 

Overall, dinner contained most of the unhealthy elements, in comparison breakfast was the healthiest from the presented meals.

Added sodium was consumed by Americans in 43% during dinner, and lunch was the second meal which provided most of the sodium accounted for 25%. 

Around a quarter of daily sodium income was provided in breakfast and snacks.

As well as with sodium, the dinner was the meal which comprised of the highest amount of saturated fats and they were at the level of 37% of daily consumption.

In comparison to sodium content, the snacks and breakfast seemed to be more unhealthy if it comes to fatty acids, because they provided 21% and 16% of daily saturated fat intake, respectively. Similarly to sodium, lunch provided 26% of fats.

The most significant provider of added sugars in the American diet were snacks with 42% content. In opposite to sodium and saturated fats, sugars in dinner made up 23 % of the daily income of this unhealthy nutrient. The percentage of added carbohydrates in breakfast was 16% and it was the same as the additional fatty acids content in this meal. Lunch seemed to be the healthiest meal if it comes to added sugars and provided 19% of their daily income.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, similarly, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21097046414 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98834919578 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0887159421 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.222222222 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111391533613 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492907469663 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504506503978 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622743594555 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412185916208 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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