Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
It is said excessive body weight in children has to turn into a tremendous issue around the globe. If children caught obesity at an early age, they have lost a plethora of advantages in life and health. This essay discusses the causes and effects of the existing issue and provides solutions to resolve it.
To start with, the reasons for obesity during childhood are because of the high consumption of carbohydrates products. Children tend to put a mouthful of sugary food and drinks into their belly without noticing the dangers of their actions. The unhealthy sweets are available everywhere in front of the children, such as convenience stores, supermarkets, malls that are provided by tons of food and beverages brands, namely Coca Cola, Pepsi, M&M, Hershey, and many more. Moreover, the sweets have addictive sustenance that triggers the appetite of the eater causes young consumers desperately to put some sweets in their mouths repeatedly. Eventually, the children would formulate a faulty habit of eating and result in gaining weight from time to time, and ultimately, obesity and diabetes. It is shown that children with an overweight body can be lazy, procrastinating, and facing difficulty in body movement. These signs usually are too little too caught attentions of parents. The reason is that the children are not having enough exercise and outdoor activities needed to burn their energy and calorie intake. Without exercise, children consume no energy, and sugar in the body turns to fats instead of energy. Interestingly, the playground for children in the park or play zone now replaced with gaming devices such as smartphones and PS4. Children nowadays love to spend hours on computer gaming instead of working out and exercises like before.
To prevent the effects of childhood obesity, encourage and support from parents are needed. Children should be discouraged to consume unhealthy food, especially high carbohydrates food, and learn to perform a diet habit of using only nutritious edibles, which provides vitamins and essentials substance. Besides, parents should advise young generations to practice sports and a healthy lifestyle enthusiastically. Children would get a fit outlook and a healthy immune system to protect from any diseases.
In conclusion, it is easy for children to get obese from the bad habit. However, with a healthy lifestyle and attention from parents, it is possible to control and prevent the issue from happening.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 925, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...ifficulty in body movement. These signs usually are too little too caught attentions of par...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'carbohydrates'' or 'carbohydrate's'?
Suggestion: carbohydrates'; carbohydrate's
...consume unhealthy food, especially high carbohydrates food, and learn to perform a diet habit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, as to, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29770992366 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82525261312 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1500622665 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802122074127 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265220662578 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405572416614 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554478600262 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274842453505 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.