Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television, however , television cannot replace the book as a learning tool ,which is why children are less well.educated today .to waist extent do you agree or disagree .
In this contemporary world , technology is getting more and more advance ,In this modern era , juvenile spend a lot of time watching television ,while,television cannot take a place of book for learning material .Thesedays,children are less well - educated . I totally accord with this statement of topic because children cannot enhance their vocabulary with television .I would discuss these in the upcoming paragraphs .
To embark on ,when children watch television program ,sometime,crime show and action scenes are distracted their mind and create negative effect ,which is not good for their future .Moreover,children pay their attension on audio and pictures that is why, they cannot learn anything as well as they cannot enhance their communication skill . Taking the case of India , few children belong to affluent family or good family who are become goon because of television programmes.
Further discussing the same, when they watch the television they cannot enhance their reading skill as well as concentrate skill because when people read the books ,they only pay their attention on book but if people watch television they pay their attention on audio and pictures so,due to this, they cannot increase their concentrates skill .Apart from this,when children spend their time on television it is harmful to eyes to children .
To conclude , but some merits of watching television cannot be neglected such as reading books are boring but children can easily learn anything because of audio and pictures .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48510638298 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0083986284 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.722378357 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.833333333 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.1666666667 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248568540543 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143090470372 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055969805784 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175444572929 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318390494313 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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