Plausibility shows that young generations, nowadays, are contingent on technological recreation and online media entertainment more than attending out-door physical activities, such as football or team games. From my perspective, both statements are all meet the development of social skills for youngsters.
When it comes to the beneficial prospect of achieving physical condition, conspicuously, it makes a significant contribution to children’s health and relationship. The plain truth is that the sporting actions are required a chain of associated human movements, which enable the player to be active and motive for generating caloric burn process. As a result, outdoor activities are a good way to keep the man in shape, also let the hair down, reaching the sense of fulfillment and refreshment. Another worth mentioning factor that the youth can attain a great level of consolidation due to the real match experiences of certain sports with their teammates. By the virtue of encountering the like-minded people in order to get the final trophy, the social relationship and mutual apprehension can be enriched by the practice of training and competing on the yard together.
In comparison with the merits of playing sporty games, simultaneously, there is some upper hand of entertaining media game. Because of the innovating modernized world, human, especially, children have a closer approach to the computer and gain a deeper insight or understanding about the electronic media. This means the more precious and valuable information is obtained online stage, the more exorbitant of dedicate living for the digital industry evolutionary. By the high-rate frequency of the 21st-century games, the brain thinking speed will be ameliorated to be appropriated to the technological revolution which is the future financial field. Particularly, according to BBC news researching in a group of 8 to 14 ages who directly contact to shooting games, their natural reflexion of the brain is more sensitive than normal people, approximately 30%.
To conclude, the advantages of recreational events and physical entertainments should be utilized and equivalently essential.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...d competing on the yard together. In comparison with the merits of playing sporty games...
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Line 5, column 721, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...C news researching in a group of 8 to 14 ages who directly contact to shooting ga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64133738602 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37388482699 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656534954407 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3991536981 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.769230769 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176889607779 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051968625118 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251838663948 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898329221894 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322750509664 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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