The modern world is confronting the possibility of natural resources’ depletion due to the increase of environmental problems. Some people gas, oil, and coal are indispensable to human’s life, however, I would argue that reducing the use of fossil fuels will have a positive impact on preserving our environment.
The first point to note is the benefit of using alternative energy sources such as wind and solar power. The sources of these energies are unlimited, while others such as oil and coal are not, and they will soon disappear if we overexploit them which is what we are doing now. In addition, the emissions gas from vehicles is discharged into the air every day, which will lead to the increase of air pollution as well as negatively affects community health. Moreover, smog, an environmental hazard, is released into the air due to the use of fossil fuels. It damages the plants and harms the crops as well as the health of many kinds of trees and vegetarians.
On the other hand, we can not deny a few advantages of using fossil fuels. It plays a major role in developing the economies of many countries, especially those in the middle east. Some countries, such as Qatar, Dubai, and UAE are famous for their huge sources of oil, which have dramatically enhance their economies and their citizens’ quality of life. Stop using fossil fuels means directly destroy these countries’ economies as well as leads to a big upheaval in the world’s economy.
In conclusion, despite the benefits and profits that fossil fuels bring to human’s life, I personally think that renewable sources of power are definitely idea substitutions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...sources of oil, which have dramatically enhance their economies and their citizens&apos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07971014493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98775769972 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8053368323 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223167411269 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799039464054 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687923495376 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128057642277 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022562019372 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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