The Atmosphere change there are dentrimental effect on farmland, cyclone, rise sea level because of increase temperature and impact on global warming. Weather alternative is now several face upcoming hazard situation to our world, but there is not enough time political action to control extremely but all over people to combat against the pollution.
First, climate vacillation main causes of human population so folks can self control the hand-held this issue. There are all country to stand against the climate various, so own authority reduced the pollution and more zenith on renewable resource like a wind, tidal, solar system other so on. Awareness program should be conduct amid the people than take self encourage keeping in touch with tree and surrounded the home made out green houses. The government should more tree planet in free space and industrial pollution can cut it down. For instance amid 18th-19th century more people attracted with plant but nowadays rise population human are more selfish and attitude to run away from tree.human and government can preserve forestation. Nowadays many technology can used to filter the air, water and land pollution and strictly rules and regulations apply on industrial companies than they control the pollution sustain the environment.
O the other human opinion, political art to not control excessive consumer and pollution. Political action bound the develop the trees and cut- down the pollution in our planet. Only political can not handle to control this situation alone, but organization together work more given satisfaction and control climate change.
To conclude, climate variation people can not ignored this debated, whatever folks can not control the pollution than dangerous to our planet effect on air, water and land resource the main impact on human life.
- It is difficult for people in the cities getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes and salutation? 56
- More and more people are buying food that is ready to eat instead of cooking by themselves. Do this development has advantages or disadvantages. 56
- The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Nowadays morw tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it is happening? Is it a negative or positive development. 61
- The chart bellow shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'ignore'
Suggestion: ignore
...clude, climate variation people can not ignored this debated, whatever folks can not co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60599935512 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.345892868 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195823778235 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824136361892 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742721023697 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150326897509 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857565514241 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.