Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is competitiveness a positive or negative quality?
It is undeniable that competitiveness is considered an important and beneficial trait among people. This quality has certain effects on other people, but I reasonably think that this noteworthy feature is a productive quality.
Nowadays, the influence of competitiveness on determined individuals is not a secret. Two completely opposing effects of this important quality seem to be especially noteworthy. First, the positive phase of competitiveness causes the rapid development of companies and corporations by establishing a fair competition between employees in order to show their talents and abilities. Taking part in these events give the employee an opportunity to show how intelligent and ambitious they are. Second, the negative phase of competitiveness has a darker side, which can cause major devastation on ones colleagues and the company. Creating some sources of internal discord in a company leads to hatred and lowering the self-esteem, which is some of the many potential results of creating this rivalry.
But with all the negative and positive effects on an individual, I believe that competitiveness is a positive trait. As a matter of fact, being competitive makes it possible to become organized. Concentrating on a specific goal while there is a competition results in finishing in a better place. There are multiple reasons that why competitiveness is a productive trait, but in my opinion the most significant influence on an individual is the self-confidence granting essence. Self-confidence is known to be the most important trait that one can have by reaching goals and successfully done tasks, resulting in a lively life.
In conclusion, I believe that competitiveness is a positive quality that can help people find their way in life and granting them some useful traits such as self-confidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47535211268 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47802314698 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1923835766 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399194502522 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13567741289 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851208056297 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234282966506 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249084214778 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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