Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often argued that computers are to be the most essential way for invention of the long ancient hundred years. I am strongly in favour of the opinion that people are really put the life up when computers are created.
On the one hand, I have to admit that computers which are private instruments are the most vital for life of human. When knowledge become more intelligent, human could make a lot of machines like that computers in order to save data. Obviously, people could not remember all of things from the name, age, address or numbers, so one of instrument help people sum everything only is computer during the long years. Secondly, people must know and broaden the knowledge, computers could search anything about lifestyle, nature, worldwide,... A good example of this is that computers open our eyes a wide range of life. A small pupil would watch about animal which was animal lived from our ancestor such as dinosaurs. Another major reason to computers are the most tool of human is people could save the time. On the daily basic, while employees must remember and written 1000 names, addresses and information about products they produced, computers could input more data in a short time and people must not think about them.
Despite this, some would argue that having many machines produced of the last hundred years including: train which run by steam or telephone,...This things also help people reduce labour of workers. Everything could complete more faster and easier. As a result, people could talk with their family members who live far away or deliberate what action to take before important event if they are not nearly.
In conclusion, I still believe that computers are the most essence invention own people of the last hundred time ago. In addition, nowadays, the life would be happiness and fast by computers which are helpful instruments.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...thing about lifestyle, nature, worldwide,... A good example of this is that comput...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...g: train which run by steam or telephone,...This things also help people reduce la...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...rain which run by steam or telephone,...This things also help people reduce labour o...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...rain which run by steam or telephone,...This things also help people reduce labour o...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...r of workers. Everything could complete more faster and easier. As a result, people could t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93987341772 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52269581035 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5039717216 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183091632971 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690922752477 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616098545707 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132132750388 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351347208517 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...thing about lifestyle, nature, worldwide,... A good example of this is that comput...
^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...g: train which run by steam or telephone,...This things also help people reduce la...
^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...rain which run by steam or telephone,...This things also help people reduce labour o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...rain which run by steam or telephone,...This things also help people reduce labour o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...r of workers. Everything could complete more faster and easier. As a result, people could t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93987341772 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52269581035 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5039717216 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183091632971 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690922752477 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616098545707 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132132750388 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351347208517 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.