Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
These days, public debate has been going on over whether regions are becoming similar because the same products are able to purchased anywhere in the world. It is my firm conviction that although there are several drawbacks from this matter, its benefits are more significant.
Buying the resemble products in over the world has a wealth of advantages. To start with, commerce of countries has developed from this happen. It is well-known that some countries which regions have the nearly frontier as Vietnam - Lao, policies of open frontier are sharply pushing up. For example, in Vietnam, when the government has exported our products into China, Lao, Malaysia and some other countries, the relationships also become more higher than before. This has been proved that researchers argue the economy of one's nation was witnessed a significant increase, account for 80% in whole of all fields. As a result, getting the same products in around the world can put for carry on business on.
On the other hand, thinking about overseas national who have lived in other regions, people can buy products of indigenous land when they have felt to remember their countries. In addition, Vietnamese residents in United Kingdom currently can buy the specific foods in their cities like Pho. Obviously, countries not that to become similar when this trend active, because each of nations have method which could make their product though the same with products in father nations but packets, advertises are different. Countries can buy categories of products, after that, region populations can produce many finished products which bring charming their culture.
In conclusion, on the basic above positive development, I reckon that buying the same products anywhere in the world have bring a lot of benefits for economy and commerce of countries. Accordingly, it would be advisable for governments and individuals to raise rich their products or their culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, well, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27243589744 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63621063426 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9268480757 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327421600054 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104701614073 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658159907995 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195465375206 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502556339834 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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