Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In last centuries, the computer is considered to be an extraordinary invention of human beings.Whilst some people disagree with the given statement.In my point view, i indeed advocate that computer is a stunning object people ever make.
To begin with, computer is a radical platform in the innovation in human life. One of the common evidence is the appearance of media platform (e.g facebook, twitter, skype).which social media, people are accesible to anywhere , anytime.For instance, people in variety national can know each other by facebook, or people far from their home for studying or working can contact with their acquaintances through Skype. In working , the computer play a key role known as the astounding working machine.It minimizes the effort of human and maximize the product efficience.For instance, in company, the usage of computer known as its memory containability which can save up the array of information accurately and safely .In food industry, staff are gradually superseded by machine which can reduce output and overwhelm the number of production. At the present , the computer is treated as encyclopedia where people can seak out anything in the world. With the computer and the connection of internet, people can visualize every scenes of the world through screen.
In the back side of the coin , the computer is an unexpected factor in generating many kind of crime especiallly cybercrime.This is a vitally problematic situation when a thousand people are being stolen their profile in social platform everyday (e.g facebook).In particular, cybercrime can break code for stealing money from the bank or individual bank account.In health domain, the array of office staff work with computer are facing to the decilne of visual.The main factor of this problem is that people have to work on the screen in the long period of time .
In a nutshell, invention of computer is a significant step to human being while it also exist some limitation to social and human health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for instance, in fact, in particular, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21495327103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96066780321 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.171123384 49.4020404114 334% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.25 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.125 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122653236452 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062544007087 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031744333433 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869820849863 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284789000121 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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