Computers games are extremely popular with children nowadays.
What are the negative impact of these children playing computer games, and what can be done to minimize the bad effects
In recent years, the number of time that spent by children to playing computer games has increased. In this essay, I would examine the negative impacts and suggest solutions minimize the effects.
There are two main negative impacts of the kids who consume computer games. Firstly, too much staying in front of computers or gadgets could cause them to get ill. The worst is, it might disrupt eye’s health such as sore eye or symptom of nearsighted. Thus, they are required to wear glasses in order to be able to see clearly. Secondly, the children could be an antisocial and introverted person. It might be true that having fun with the electronic game could train their brain’s abilities. But, they usually only have one or two friends and speaking less. Additionally, in society, some of them would miss talking with family or go out for sport.
However, there are two feasible solutions to those problems. To begin with, parents should make strict rules about playing games and remain to give them the understanding that it is for their own good. For example, make a PlayStation schedule which they could only play on Saturday and Sunday. Also, they could join in school clubs like sports or music to divert them from the desktop and make friends. The next one is consuming vegetables and fruits which contain vitamin A. It is known for owning various benefits on the eye and could prevent diseases affecting eye’s healthy.
All in all, I think spending much time in computer games would cause children to become more selfish because they only focus on themselves. Therefore, parents need to make a requirement if they want to play and the most important is to get along with them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49041205421 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2830417721 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9444444444 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196729320555 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613403390781 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655741602573 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14183555268 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722358733263 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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