Consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from competing companies. To what extent are the consumers influenced by advertisements? What measure can protect the consumers?
Nowadays, people are inundated with various forms of advertising. In my standpoint, such excessive advertising can be harmful to the society and thereby, appropriate measures are necessary to protect prospective buyers.
To start with, manufacturers and entrepreneurs, in order to maximize their profits, spare no effort to persuade potential customers to purchase the products that are not of necessity and hence a total waste of money. With the advancement of techonology, we would be able to see various forms of advertising everyday, ranging from television commercials to simple flyers. For instance, it is very common to see the logos of the tournament sponsors when watching a football match. Likewise, should we watch a blockbuster movie in a cinema, there is a high chance that we could notice certain products are being embedded in the film for advertisement purposes. Such an overwhelming volume of advertising do we experience that we tend to be profoundly influenced by it and hence purchase without deliberate thought.
Though not being easy and straightforward, there are several ways to combat the downsides of advertisment. First, government should publish regulations and impose restrictions on advertising of harmful products such as tobacco and alcohol. However, they are not capable to control all form of advertisement. This means that consumers must be conscious and make use of their common sense when shopping. Secondly, parents are advised not to excessively expose their children to the commercials, which may consist of either inappropriate contents or unhealthy products. This would be achieved by either turning off the television when it comes to the advertisment session or explaning to the young that possessing newer toys is not necessary.
In conclusion, despite being unable to flee away from the advertisements and their associated detrimental effects, suitable initiatives should be enacted to protect the potential consumers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ble to see various forms of advertising everyday, ranging from television commercials to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56478405316 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23660002777 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0695183656 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160630338122 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490414838705 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413972395206 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978038943519 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205756591015 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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