Consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from competing companies. To what extent are the consumers influenced by advertisements? What measure can protect the consumers?
Nowadays, people are encountering the inundation of advertisements from a variety of producers who choose to approach their prospective customers by means of promotion. Such approach can mislead people and gradually alter their spending behavior. Hence, feasible remedies should be enacted to safeguard the customers from such negative impacts.
To start with, it is rather evident that excessive exposure to advertisements brings about detrimental effects to people. Firstly, though being persuasive and informative, commercials may contain inaccurate information and manufacturers tend to exaggerate the effects of their products. This, in return, entices more customers to purchase for commodities that are unnecessary and hence a waste of money. Secondly, some companies deliberately aim at the children by exposing them to colorful and captivating advertisements. Being inexperienced, the youngsters are easily swayed and influenced and therefore, put a pressure on their parents to buy them items such as toys and game consoles that may cost a fortune yet unnecessary.
Obviously, measures to combat the repercussion of advertisement and protect the customers are vital. One promising solution is that government should impose strict regulations on what kind of products should be brought to the public. To illustrate, products such as alcohol and tobacco are not advised to promote broadly owing to its detrimental effects to human’s health in which lung cancer is an exemplar. Besides, campaigns ought to be organized to raise people awareness and knowledge on making a wise and prudent purchase decision. Such activities could therefore enable potential consumers to refrain themselves from excessive purchases and save additional amount money for other needs.
In conclusion, the omnipresence of advertisements is harmful to the consumers thus, government as well individuals should together undertake actions to mitigate the downsides of such advertising activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87586206897 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24588827986 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4813763596 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184506055978 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540197239894 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570577207984 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110296683815 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549359030191 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.