The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise ?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity ?
At the present time, our world are facing several serious problems regarding on different aspects, it can be environmental problem or the continued rise in the world’s population. The latter has been discussed by abundant of people and agreed that this is the greatest problem the world has ever experienced.
The continued rise of the populations can be caused by various of factors. One of the factors is since the technology has been developed and always improving, this situation also implied to medical care where the hospital equipment get more advance and more medicine to be invented. That can lead to lower death rate and increase birth or life rate, life expectancy will be increased as well.
With all the factors mention above, I completely agree that this is the biggest problem to our world. Because of number of population are being increased everyday, this world currently has no enough land for houses or other purposes. Some countries force to cut off some of its arable land to turned into private properties and it can lead to the next serious problem, which is environmental issue. Additionally, most of the people are afraid that the recources will be gone sooner or later. People sometimes use the earth supplies excessively more than they actually need.
In conclusion, it is actually a very difficult matter to tackle for both the government and the citizens. But some countries, for example, China had already promulgated their regulation which each family can only have up to one child. Sounds cruel, but it is actually work to reduce the continued rise. But still, innumerable people might unaware of this severe problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...umber of population are being increased everyday, this world currently has no enough lan...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cutting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: cutting
...or other purposes. Some countries force to cut off some of its arable land to turned i...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, regarding, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06204379562 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68607436071 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4697455492 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274964441327 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941014497391 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108426030576 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178035281846 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144031765577 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.