The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
In this present era, the greatest challenge plaguing humanity is the continued increase in the global population. This essay will show that advancement in the medical and healthcare field is one of the reasons behind this development. However, i disagree with the notion that increasing population is the biggest issue faced by mankind, as other issues such as global warming is one of the most contending issues to human existence.
Admittedly, one of the major culprits for a continued surge in the world's population is the growth in medical and health field. Medical breakthroughs by scientist has made available and affordable to the public, medical drugs for curing all kinds of diseases. Hence, people are now able to use this drugs to better their health and prolong their life span. when this happens there is a decrease in death rate, thereby resulting to an increase in population.
Although a continued rise in population can cause severe downturns, many argue that there are other bigger problems facing human existence such as global warming and i agree. In otherwords, the problem of an increasing population can be curtailed by more awareness, promotion and education on family planning and use of contraceprives. Whereas global warming is a serious environmental issue which has detrimental effects to our planet. For instance, according to the Global Scientist Association, should the issue of global warming continue to increase, humanity could be wiped out in the next 15 years. Thus, issues of global warming is far more a threat to humanity than a continued hike in population.
In conclusion, one of the possible causes of population increase is the progress in health and medicine and in my view i disagree that a continued rise in population is the biggest issue faced by humanity as i believe the problems of global warming is far greater than global population increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14838709677 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88727517921 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490322580645 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.850769033 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290320332095 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106201245473 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100139293048 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186257373895 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728833889412 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.