Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?
In the recent years, with the remarkable development of global trade, an increasing number of customers tend to consume similar goods and services from different nations around the world. In my opinion, this trend comes along with some positive and negative effects which will be discussed below.
As far as I know, the fact that products consumptions can be done conveniently through phones or websites create intense competitions among companies all around the globe, which can be a positive effect to the economy. In particular, this issue forces companies to improve the quality and productivity of both their goods and services which benefits customers. As a result, people would purchase authentic and good quality commodities rather than fake ones. The rivalry between two food and beverages giants Coca cola and Pepsi, for example, helps people enjoy delicious drinks with trendy packaging and reasonable prices
However, there are several drawbacks of this issue that should be mentioned. It is my firm belief that the main negative impact is the disappearance of many valuable traditions and cultural diversity which are certainly crucial parts of a nation. For instance, fast food shops such as Mcdonald’s or KFC can be found anywhere on streets instead of traditional food restaurants which gradually change the love of citizens for national cuisine. Those countries may lose their identities, which can be the root of harmful and unwanted further consequences.
All things considered, there is no doubt that global trade has both positive and negative influences on countries, espescially developing ones.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in particular, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8347554939 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664031620553 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6219487212 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121432100573 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470216040814 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259326772596 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789088645195 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268379418283 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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