In many decades, one of the most significant issue throughout the world is crime. Nowadays, many people think that there is no way to prevent this issue. In opinion, I totally disagree with this point of view because of some reason such as education or development of economy.
In my opinion, education is the best idea to prevent the crime problem in the world. Firstly, most of prevent actions come from the lack of understanding and knowledge from the criminal which could significantly decrease by a great education. For example, in the countries where its education is developed well such as Finland or Germany have the rate of criminal at very low level. Secondly, the awareness of drawback of a crime could be understand by most of people through the education. If children were taught about the crime in the early age, the percentage that they could do a crime in the future almost equal to zero. Finally, due to learning about the harm of crime, people could have more awareness about the other who could have the idea to do a crime and prevent it.
Moreover, the development of economy also has a positive effect on the prevention of criminal. In recent year, most GDP of countries is increased which lead to the better life for their citizen. In a good living situation, the intention to do a crime could be decreased to zero. A better situation in their lives also help children to have more opportunities to access to the education. For example, in some developing countries, many poor children have been gone to school for free in some recent years. Therefore, the rate of crime in these countries could decrease to lower level.
In conclusion, although many people believe it is impossible to prevent the crime, I still think that it could be done by the education for people and the growth of economy for all countries over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...wback of a crime could be understand by most of people through the education. If children were...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74613003096 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63280248373 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482972136223 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0980768704 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196233928776 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072974765946 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627884656124 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13493919088 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382555565556 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.