Nowadays, sweet drinks are becoming more and more popular throughout the world. There are two main reasons for this trend and some solutions could deal with this assumption.
Appetite seems to be the most important factor for this tendency. In some recent decades, sugar-based beverage has been very delicious with diversity kinds for billions of people. For example, in Viet Nam, large drink corporate such as Coca Cola, Pepsi or 7up was become famous thanks to many kinds of taste in some recent years. Additionally, along with delicious taste, the price of these drinks are also too economical for most people around the world. Thanks to the development of technology, the production cost become cheap enough so most people could buy one or two litters for their daily meals. In Africa, the poorest continent of the world, residents also could buy these drinks every day.
However, the best solution for this tendency is the changing of people drinking habit. If people have more awareness and knowledge about modern conditions which are made by the exceed amount of sugar consumption, they could change their habit easily. In fact, there are a number of television shows about the disadvantages of sugar which could lead people to a healthier lifestyle. Along with it, corporate also try to improve their goods to have less sugar or become non-sugar beverage which increase their customer’s health. In addition, the tax policy of government could lead to the increase of sugar beverage’s price. Therefore, it will limit the popularity of these drinks to many people, especially with children.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that sugar-based drinks are very tasty but it also leads to many health problems. This could be decreased thanks to consume not too much sugar in people habit and raise the awareness about this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...out modern conditions which are made by the exceed amount of sugar consumption, they could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55587341018 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2714938168 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294644317159 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103989935701 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522145456354 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193144589253 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313961193206 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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