Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the number of criminals is increasing every year and becoming a difficult problem in the world. A large number of people think that we cannot have any solutions to solve the problem of crime. I completely disagree with this statement.
In my opinion, there is a variety of methods for crime prevention. Firstly, police force who represents the authority of government and enforce the law, they have responsibility for deterring the offenders. For example, the police officers often patrol streets and if they detect some suspicious or criminal activities such as terrorism attacks in time. Therefore, they keep the public safety and make life safer. Secondly, prison is a common way for criminals. The imprisonment can prevent the dangerous criminals such as murders and terrorists from affecting negatively the safety of other citizens. As a result, the countries will reduce crime rates in society.
On the other hand, there are some reasons why many people believe that nothing can really inhibit in crime. One reasons for this view is that crime rates have risen in recent years and the types of crime are quite complicated. Consequently, it is difficult for police officers to fully prevent and control crime. In addition, more offenders committed crimes again after they have been punished. For example, some juvenile criminals continue have criminal activities such as shoplifting or violent crime although they received education and rehabilitation.
In conclusion, although crime is one of the important problems facing the nation, I believe that every effort from the government and individuals can deter crime with some solutions motioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...oming a difficult problem in the world. A large number of people think that we cannot have any so...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37262357414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80539833151 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9287199902 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158152792231 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549816348467 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471338413694 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104995720487 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289481088127 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.