The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.
Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
Nowadays societies have been encountering with issues of teenage crime more than in the past. These cases are now increasing rapidly in the modern world with changing lifestyles. In this essay, some reasons for this problem will be addressed and possible solutions will also be discussed.
First of all, there is no doubt that problem families would be the single main cause for delinquency. Instead of being brought up under tender loving care of their parents, children become problem doers in the societies with higher divorce rates. Secondly, a financial insufficiency in these days of higher living expenses leads to such crimes. Having been unable to earn their own living yet, teenagers tend to commit crimes in need of extra money by shoplifting for their desired things such as modern technical gadgets and even by robbery for drug abuses. Finally, the last but not the least factor depends on the nature of youth itself. It is the adolescent period that parents often find hard to control their children who likely to take part in street fights due to aggressive nature and try out new things, for instance, substance abuse, from peer pressure.
To tackle these issues, parents are largely responsible for their children. They should avoid family breakdowns at all costs by being role models for their offspring not to go astray and to keep them on the right track, especially during the transition period from adolescents to adults as well as by overwhelming with kindness and love. Moreover, governments have to provide better supports for youngsters by establishing more youth centres and creating good job opportunities. In addition to these, strict law enforcement should come into an effect for them who break the rules and regulations. After all, today’s youths should be encouraged to participate in volunteering programs which give them insight into real world, help them develop better attitudes and equip them with essential life skills.
In fact, it is clear that there are various reasons for this rise in teenage crime, but solutions are available on the other hand, too. If these actions are taken now, the situation should be prevented from deteriorating any further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, after all, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15083798883 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6200581286 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645251396648 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6430710679 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148013876319 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484578264878 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568450798307 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111135212773 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687994305007 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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