The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.
Crime has been an inevitable thing that has been stuck with us forever. A lot of crime used to take place in the past. And preventing and solving those crimes took a lot of work, sometimes ending up being unsolved. In my opinion, thanks to the advanced technology, crime rates have reduced a great deal and it has also been possible to prevent crimes in a large amount in recent times.
Preventing crimes has never been as easy task. Because law enforers cannot know where exactly a crime is going to take place. But with advancement of surveillance technology, it is possible to keep an eye virtually every important places, including crime prone areas. Now a days we have Closed circuit camera, which is used for security purposes in many important places, even in houses. There are advanced satellites, which has also been a great help in preventing crimes. Also, police and authorities use modern tracking devices to track the motions of suspects, that gives them an idea of prospective crimes and time to react effectively. These technological advancements also raise fear in people’s minds who are about to commit a crime, which is another achievement.
Modern technology is also used in solving crimes. In the past, when we did not have access to these useful technologies, unravelling a mystery was not a piece of cake. Although it is still complicated, technology has reduced a lot of work and effort. For instance, if the authority is searching for a suspect, they can do that very easily through advanced tracking systems, like GPS, mobile phones etc. In the past they had to manually search for the person, where the success rate was not enough.
With all these benefits, we have to keep in mind that only the law enforcers do not use technology. The criminals are also using it’s benefits. So sometimes it may also create some difficulties. There are also cyber criminals who were not in existence before the invention of internet. This poses an additional sector of crime.
After all, despite some complications, technology has indeed helped a lot to reduce crime. It also contributes in solving crimes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing crimes has never been as easy task. Because law enforers cannot know where exactly ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...nt places, including crime prone areas. Now a days we have Closed circuit camera, which is...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...laces, including crime prone areas. Now a days we have Closed circuit camera, which is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, after all, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95821727019 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77146876188 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562674094708 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0289120464 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3913043478 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6086956522 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315660859279 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921753459955 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674953281038 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175168316948 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932505753987 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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