Crimes and other form of information on television and in a newspaper have adverse consequence. This kind of information should be limited to display in the media. To what extent do you agree or Disagree?
In this modern era, it has severe misfortunes of the data for crimes and other factors on the media. This sort of news should we decreased from the television and other kind of social media. This essay will show my agreement to the given statement in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the news of crimes and other dangerous stunts have serious issues. This is because today from a baby to order person have Smartphone and they can get these type of news easily the effect of crimes and news like rapes, Murder leave a bad impression on each and every person. Because of that, it can make person to think about that particular thing all the time. For example, in an article of famous newspaper it is written that 25% of the population get affected by the news of crimes through television, radios and social media. Therefore, these information have serious effect on the People's life.
On the other hand, these information have bad impact because some people after listening to these type of news take take these works to serious and try to be practical in their life. As a consequence of that they can also get stuck in a dangerous situation. For example, by seeing people on social media having guns other people are also started buying guns to show but they can face many difficulties hands criminal data have too effects.
To conclude it, I totally agree to the notion, that these type of news should be less shown on median and television for the sake of human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...on, radios and social media. Therefore, these information have serious effect on the Peoples life...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...the Peoples life. On the other hand, these information have bad impact because some people aft...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: take
...e after listening to these type of news take take these works to serious and try to be pr...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and try to be practical in their life. As a consequence of that they can also get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, kind of, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66920152091 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36396734286 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520912547529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8193214088 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228401926594 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089072974996 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542435491884 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142563694994 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401003048885 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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