Some people prefer shopping from shopping centres while other prefer local markets. What are the advantage of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?
Shopping complexes now a days are more preferable amongst the individuals on the other hand some individuals to local markets for shopping. This essay will send some light on the advantages of both type of the shopping.
Firstly, a number of people do shopping from the multiplexes. This is because in the shopping centres you can get anything under one roof. You have not to go in the hustle and bustle of the crowdy markets to do shopping. To explicate it, in an article of Times of India it is mentioned that 63% of the total population choose Shopping Centre to buy materials. Therefore some people love to do shopping from the multiplexes.
On the other hand, few people choose the street markets for shopping. This is because in the local shops they can buy things according to their budget. They can purchase cheaper as well as expensive product in the local shops easy return is also available. For example, 53% of the citizens who have low income they choose local shops for all sort of things. Hence, people prefer local markets to purchase things according to their needs.
To conclude it, the shopping centres and local markets are equally preferable by the people to do shopping. I prefer both type of shopping as i am a shopoholic person and i am fond pf visiting different type of stores.
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... have not to go in the hustle and bustle of the crowdy markets to do shopping. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, sort of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72489082969 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55398417893 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497816593886 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2428192609 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2857142857 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479451987058 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175788752231 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102009497871 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296587092699 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512527362968 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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