It is believed by many that crime show and crime related news are one of the reason of increasing number of crime and it has bad impact on people. I don't think these mediums are reason of crime.
Nowadays, there are many crime shows are available on television. Many reports suggest that crime related shows and news are making bad impact on people and specially on children. According to this sources we must such shows to prevent the crime. There are many studies which say that many criminals took the inspiration for their crime from crime shows. One of the biggest reason of crime is anger. Sometime a person can take bad step without thinking anything in the anger which is impulsive crime but planed. In this type of matter we can't blame crime shows. It is also true that in pre planned crime people take inspiration from the shows but truth is they are just take the ideas from shows. In these cases these criminals already have crime oriented mentality. It is not right to blame such shows.Some people also blame news channel for report crime news. But these news channels are made fro report news either they good or bad. It is their work to report the news and show the world what is going on in this world. These news help to prevent crime next time and help people to be alert
There are many countries where crime ratio have been decreasing from the years although they telecasting these type of shows. In example, in greenland crime rate is decreasing even though in this country many crime shows are available and biggest reason of drop of rate is good government policy for citizen.
There is only one important thing that we need to take care of is we should not let children watch these shows. They easily get manipulated by shows and that can lead them to crime. Kids are very naive and in their age they don't understand wrong and right very much. It is the only disadvantage of crime shows.
I totally disagree that crime related shows and news have anything to lead the adults for crime. It might be able to lead children to crime but we should supervise them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rime and it has bad impact on people. I dont think these mediums are reason of crime...
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...and specially on children. According to this sources we must such shows to prevent t...
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...e but planed. In this type of matter we cant blame crime shows. It is also true that...
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...ty. It is not right to blame such shows.Some people also blame news channel for repo...
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... news. But these news channels are made fro report news either they good or bad. It...
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...e world what is going on in this world. These news help to prevent crime next time and hel...
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...ds are very naive and in their age they dont understand wrong and right very much. I...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57180851064 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1472881162 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428191489362 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2757307678 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1363636364 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 7.06120827912 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132991430643 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523824622093 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298689763655 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923110202379 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402021570723 0.056905535591 71% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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