Number of people believe that advertisement is good way to convince someone to buy a product on contratory some people think that it is not longer effective way as before. I think advertisement still make impact on person's mind for buy a product.
Advertisement is big part of our lives as we see numerous number of advertisement during our day. I personally believe that when we watch or observe something constantly it makes huge impact on our mind. This is how the marketing industry works. They spend million of dollars on advertisement and by growing technology ways of marketing have also changed. In yesteryears, mostly we saw advertisement on our television set or read about them by newspapers or billboards. As use of internet has been increasing rapidly, now we can see these advertisement on social media or video sharing site and application etcetera. this way they keep engaging to our mind drive us to buy their product. There is also one big way to promote the product and that is hire big celebrity to promote the product. We all admire any celebrity in our lives and when a huge person try to sell a thing we easily trust them as we idolize them.
Although, There is vast group of people who really believe that too much advertising is no more effective way to make a persona to purchase a product. e can not deny this argument too because nowadays people just do not buy product by claim made by company. The internet also become a source of good information. Consequently, before buying a product people must research online about the product and they compare one product to another. They compare different criteria such as price, ingredients, material, quality of product etcetera. There is also number of people who just do not run behind any celebrity and do not buy product as they claim to be best.
According to me advertisement still make big impact for promote a product and make person to buy item. Though, in today's time people choose product wisely and do not fall for false advertising as in past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...he marketing industry works. They spend million of dollars on advertisement and by grow...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'these advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; these advertisements
...been increasing rapidly, now we can see these advertisement on social media or video sharing site a...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... sharing site and application etcetera. this way they keep engaging to our mind driv...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sily trust them as we idolize them. Although, There is vast group of people who real...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: E
...o make a persona to purchase a product. e can not deny this argument too because ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...uy product as they claim to be best. According to me advertisement still make big impact for...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...nd do not fall for false advertising as in past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, really, so, still, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78753541076 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78479332646 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490084985836 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8699353512 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9473684211 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204714146237 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710786024345 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562920340681 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151887797923 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563706963629 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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