Currently there is a trend toward the use of the alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are Ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In recent years, non-traditional forms of medicine have become quite popular among people. There is an opinion that states that such type of treatment is useless, and in some cases might even be harmful. I am, however, of the opinion that alternative medicine can occasionally serve as a useful addition to the conventional ways of treatment
To commence with, it is true that alternative medicine may not always be beneficial. Since numerous non-traditional medical practices throughout the world do not really have scientific basis, people should not completely trust them. Even though some may be helpful in certain cases, assuming that the treatment is effective all of the time is a wrong thing to do, especially when it comes to the medical cases that demand urgent action when a person's life is at stake.
On the other hand, in spite of the drawbacks of non-traditional medicine, there is a big diversity of advantages that it can offer in helping people struggling with disease. First of all, some methods of alternative medicine have been thoroughly studied by scientists, and they have been proven to be gulte beneficial for human health, For instance, Uzbek traditional herb Harmala, if dried and smoked, can be utilized to sterilize the unclean air of a room, Another argument in favor of alternative medicine may be that it has tremendous psychological impact on patients , People have a tendency to want to believe in mysterious and miraculous explanations , and it is a well known fact that psychological factors play an important role in people's well-being.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although alternative ways of treatment have their own disadvantages, they can be a useful additional tool to the conventional medicine in coping with diseases.
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...mendous psychological impact on patients People have a tendency to want to believ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03472222222 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99417515796 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 288.0 20.2975951904 1419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1450.0 106.682146367 1359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 288.0 20.7667163134 1387% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 143.0 7.06120827912 2025% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20599516778 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20599516778 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128570938793 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142383448337 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 146.3 13.0946893788 1117% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -229.3 50.2224549098 -457% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.8 11.3001002004 1034% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.87 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 117.2 10.1190380762 1158% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 117.0 10.7795591182 1085% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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